Wednesday, August 6, 2014

The War Part 3. by: Jack Kramer

The War Part 3 White lights.
I opened my eyes all i could see was white lights i was striped of my gear. I looked side to side on one side i saw my brother. On the other i say a man. We were laid on a floor and had a blanket draped over us i could see the door out but it had a guard standing next to it. Man this sucked! All i could Hear were russian men talking. I thought i was in some kind of… testing room? I didn't know but maybe it had to do with the toxins spreading from the biological weapons. At this point I don't care i wanted out. I spoke a little russian. This may come  in handy and they didn't take my pocket knife it wouldn't be much but it would help Somehow. At this point i almost wanted to give up. With the gangs and killers.
It was hopeless i don't even know if the rumors were true that the out post was evacuating the citizens to alaska! But i wanted Abe to see mom and dad he was so young when we were separated and i missed them too. I looked back at Abe he was sleeping (or knocked out i don't know) I studied the room carefully and found where my gear was placed. I silently hoped that they weren't  going to kill me
I noticed that i wasn't restrained in any way. I slowly sat up and scanned the room one of the men noticed me. and said something to the others and they all looked over. i didn't make eye contact and looked away "are you going to kill us" Abe said. I suddenly looked over to him and made a hand gesture to shut up. one of the men walked over and said in a soft voice "No, but we will punish you some how". He almost said it in a pleasant, comforting way. As he walked away he winked at me and then Abe. I slightly smiled at the man. and i laid down and stared to the sealing. After a couple hours later the man who seemed nice came to us and smiled all the other men had left a while ago. This mans face was almost brown from all the dirt and grime he had blonde hair and and a smiling face. i smiled back at him, I felt it had been a while sense i smiled. the man said "Hello my name is marten parks i am here to help" he said "How will you help?" I replied "i will get you out." i whispered to me. I help joy building up inside of me! I swiftly turned to Abe he was still asleep and i shook him awake "Wake up were getting out of here!" I said excitedly but quietly. he sprung to his feet and looked up and saw the guard and said "Jack were not getting out" "OHH yes we are, he's helping us!" then i sprang up to my feet. marten said "I love your bravery and courage" i blushed and got my back pack so did Abe "Its 10 at night we should  make it to the gates in about 30 minutes" he said as his jacket flayed back into the wind. "Why are we so far! for me i took 1 minute to get there!" "were farther back with the bunkers and warehouses. But i can get a ride in a transport. but still it will take a while" i frowned and followed him down the path. i saw a bus in the distance as we approached the bus i could make out sue words on it, it said Troop transport #2 i looked through the windows. No one was in it. Marten walked in pulled out some keys from his pocket and  shifted through them he found the one and turned on the bus we started to drive off. about 30 minutes later we stopped and he said "this is your stop!" i looked at him and said. "Why did you help us" he replied i was once a U.S. solider the russians captured me and put me here. Your bravery made me want to help you know time for the dirty work" he pulled out a small pistol and shot 3 guards and looked back and said "Go go go."  me and Abe Ran we swiftly slid under the main gate and made it out i looked at the two sniper towers there focus was on marten not us.
and i ran like you've never seen a kid run! i went and i went! And then finally when i couldn't see the lights of the base and it was out of sight i stopped to rest i looked at Abe his grin was so big! i laughed and chucked as the laughter came to a stop and i pulled out my sleeping baad and went to sleep.

Part 4 Coming soon. The men and the base

Thank you for reading the third edition of The War! thanks for the support and love! I love writing and can't wait to get to part 4! are you ready for part 4 well i am!

Love ~ Jack :) 


  1. Jack, you amaze me! Keep it up baby!

  2. Way to go Jack! I love reading your story and can't wait to see what happens next! Keep up the awesome job!

  3. Very creative! I look forward to reading more!